Newly Strained

May 19, 2009

By KICK3593, Roslyn Heights, NY

Fine as your laundry, but now
A classless society now hovers over the ears,
And what—just what—will be the vernacular motive?

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tinywriter1395 said...
Jun. 11, 2009 at 8:49 pm

As I do, too. I love reading, but writing...it's just like my passion, I guess. I've been writing since I was little. I'm writing my own book now. I need some good constructive critism about it.

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tinywriter1395 said...
Jun. 3, 2009 at 10:27 pm

It's okay. I totally undertand. I'm all new at this. But I do love writing. I'm actually writing a book. It's alot better than my poems. Maybe you can help me on that sometime?

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tinywriter1395 said...
May 29, 2009 at 6:50 pm

Can you please keep your negative critism to yourself?
I'm only 14 years old, and new to writing. I would appreciate it if you weren't trying to bring me down.