May 19, 2009
By "Tink31" BRONZE, Marietta, Georgia
"Tink31" BRONZE, Marietta, Georgia
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Falling apart
Crashing Down
Trying to rise
Still it fails.

Gas went down
Yeah! For once
What happens next?
Still it fails.

Money gone
Businesses closing
When will this stop
Still it fails.

Can “Obama” fix this?
Dropped so quick
Will it ever be the same?
Still he tries.

Maybe there is hope
Maybe if we try
What if it changes?
Maybe if we believe

Will it succeed?

The author's comments:
This piece was based on the daily struggles that my family has goone through in this hard economy. I wanted to show how involved I am in with the economy.

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