May 18, 2009
By evilgir BRONZE, Everett, Washington
evilgir BRONZE, Everett, Washington
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Meticulous rain
Feeding the ravenous ground
Pure is the heartbeat
That fills the world with rhythm Dancing drops eclipse the sky

The author's comments:
Like the Haiku, I believe Tankas aren’t as simple as they may seem. I wrote this one a couple years ago.

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