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I stomp
they fear me
they flee
they run to a place where they
are free
if they
try
they can
overpower
me
but they
don't
they simply
run
in fear
not knowing
what's going
on
just
try to
escape
to where
i'm not
there are
the few
who
might try to
fight back
but
those who do
die valiently
they work
together
to obtain
food
and to
build their
homes
but in
a time
of terror
it's one
man for
himself
it kind
of
reminds me
of
us...





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EdytD said...
Aug. 27, 2009 at 1:27 am
That's so cool - I definitely didn't think about that. I can definitely see how we relate to ants.
 
jofin J. said...
May 29, 2009 at 4:38 pm
I named it stomp because im stomping on ants
 
EdytD said...
May 24, 2009 at 1:18 am
it's neat. the shortened lines and long length make it a bit choppy to read, though. it reminds me of marching - da-dum, da-dum, da-dum. i'm curious - why did you name it, "stomp?"

i'd love if you took a look at my poetry; thanks! :D
 
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