when i saw you

By , winchester, ID
When I saw you..
I was afraid to me you..

When I meet you..
I was afraid to kiss you..

When I kissed you..
I was afraid to love you..

But now that I love you..
I’m afraid you lose you..





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Molly V. said...
Jun. 20, 2009 at 4:23 am
the second line is it a typo?
 
blackamethyst said...
May 21, 2009 at 1:39 am
cool. i love the way it's chronological
 
booksarelife4me said...
May 20, 2009 at 4:02 pm
ooo I love this!!!!
 
Anjo! said...
May 20, 2009 at 6:16 am
AWW.. THIS IS SO AWESOME.. I LOVE IT
 
jesusfreak said...
May 19, 2009 at 7:29 pm
OH MY GOSH!!!! i totally love this poem. i think it is totally AMAZING!!!
 
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