Part Of Me

May 14, 2009
By MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.


I look into your eyes-
a deep brown in bright.
I see a friend-
listening to everything I say.
I listen to your voice-
a sweet accent
that feels like home.
I hear a caring joke.
I feel the brush of your hand-
A belonging warmth.
I feel like I'm in my place.
And I watch you-
Really watch you,
you're becoming
one of my best-friends.
Now I just need to lasso-
And never let go.
Your dark-brown hair-
it's imprisoned in my mind.
I'll never forget you.
I see your personality blooming,
Golden-
but you'd prefer it show black.
I see your true-self.
And now,
You're a part of me.
A part that'll never go black.


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on Jun. 1 2010 at 1:13 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

Actualy, it was not good. It was great!!! I jus went back through to read a couple and I still love them now if not more than i did then. You have a great gift for writing!!!

on Jun. 1 2010 at 1:10 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

This was an old poem from before we had the 'reply' option. lol ThankYou for your comments and I remember checking out some of your work, it was good  :)

on Jun. 1 2010 at 1:09 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

Alrightey :) And i am glad to hear that you like it

on Jun. 1 2010 at 1:08 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

ThankYou     

on Jan. 7 2010 at 3:18 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

Thanks! :) I'm glad you like it.

on Jan. 2 2010 at 1:12 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i decided to check out some more of your work becasue the last time i did i really enjoyed it :) and once again, this piece did not dissappoint me :) i LOVE the line "a sweet accent that feels like home" that's so adorable yet very deep. all around a great poem :) well done once again! keep writing! :)

<3/ dreamer

on May. 29 2009 at 4:17 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

I love this piece!

You are skilled!

Please check out my work and comment, rate if you have time! Thanks!

on May. 25 2009 at 7:16 pm
BellaLuna1 BRONZE, Ozone Park, New York
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hey, i like your work thanks fror the comment on my story (unwant quintuplet) well keep writting your poetry

on May. 21 2009 at 9:03 pm
LittlestBird GOLD, North Bay, Other
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I love the way you use colors in this. Great poem!


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