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The flowers bloom in the evening sun-
Golden rays fill my face,
This is a place I like to go.
{Though it's not a place, it's in my head.}
Bright and warm-
His arms around my neck,
Laughing and joking.
All my friends are hid-
For once I'm not sure where they are.
This place I like to go is not my choice-
but who's it is,
I do not know.
For this is the place I see-
When I close my eyes in peace.
Though it only visits when I think of him.
A few butter-flies here and there-
A beautiful sight.
The grass gently blows in a light breeze.
My hair is like a feather-
being tossed over my shoulder.
His eyes are shining bright-
It feels nice.
My face grows warm with a blush,
my hands sweat in nervousness.
Not the person in this dream,
but me-
Myself.
My breathing sways-
do I want this dream to be alive-
or just be a dream?
It's already alive in me...
It's my non-living, living dream.





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Milo! said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 3:29 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
MariaMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 8:04 pm
Thank you :) I have a lot pf poetry on here from last year actually.. and i have wrote some lately that i just wasn't happy with.. I'm going to be adding more soon though. And I would be glad to check out some of your work :)
 
KumKiiMoo!! said...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 4:33 am
This is good too!! lol and thanks for the comments, again.. lol
 
MariaMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 1:07 pm
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