Whos that i hear?

May 13, 2009
By LadyHaley GOLD, The Colony, Texas
LadyHaley GOLD, The Colony, Texas
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Who’s that I hear?
Its you,
Its you begging,
Its you begging for me back!
What’s your excuse for breaking up with me?
All you said you said was you don’t feel like being with me.
Well I don’t feel like being with you,
Not now not ever!
I love you are serious words!
They are also words you told me,
You didn’t mean it,
You never will!
You said I’m important,
You I’m important to you!
No I’m not!
You tore my heart in two,
And now I hate you.


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LadyHaley GOLD said...
on Mar. 2 2011 at 8:05 pm
LadyHaley GOLD, The Colony, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 3 comments
haha when i wrote it i was a little child:) thanks for your honesty! :)

on Jul. 13 2009 at 2:17 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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honestly, i had to laugh after reading this. i know it's talking about something serious but it sounds like a stubborn little child (: it was cute and the last words add a sort of explosion to the poem. very very nice!




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