No relief

May 13, 2009
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I don’t feel any relief,


I have no where to go,
No where to hide,
No where to stay,
No where to cry,
I’m lonely,
As shiny glistening drops of water run down my pale dirty face,
I walk down the street wondering what I have done…
I have run away!
I have run away from home.
I have run away from being abused…
And yet I don’t feel any relief.

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SilverDawn said...
Jul. 13, 2009 at 2:28 pm
wow. you set the mood right away and had a sort of mysterious beginning and the meaning behind the first line becomes clear in the end. that's a really good poem. i wished i could've run away too, but i was scared and i knew i wouldn't have any place to go to so i never did. although it's kind of stupid to run away without a destination, i admire your bravery, though fear was what brought you to do it.
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