I am unique and exotic

May 13, 2009
By Twilightnme SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
Twilightnme SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"You dont know what you have until its gone"

I wonder who I will meet.
I hear the whistle of the wind.
I see the finish line.
I want to be proud of myself.
I am unique and exotic.

I pretend to be younger.
I feel the sun kissing my face.
I touch the future, where I will be.
I worry about my family's happiness.
I cry for my loved ones.
I am unique and exotic.

I understand I can't be the best.
I say life is and adventure.
I dream people will look up to me.
I try to be myself at school.
I hope to make it through life.
I am unique and exotic.

The author's comments:
This was a Language arts assingment a while ago. I would like to thank my teacher, Ms. Brown for helping me out with this one.I finally understand poetry! Thanks a bunch!

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This article has 2 comments.

Garrison123 said...
on May. 31 2009 at 12:51 am
I don't think exotic was the appropraite word to use here...

on May. 21 2009 at 6:06 pm
ZiXiang Zhang SILVER, Ridgewood, New York
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Hey there. Thanks for commenting on my Cannibal poem. Anyways, this poem is a good start...but the imageries used are a bit cliche and could be more vivid. I wish you the best! :)



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