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I wonder who I will meet.
I hear the whistle of the wind.
I see the finish line.
I want to be proud of myself.
I am unique and exotic.

I pretend to be younger.
I feel the sun kissing my face.
I touch the future, where I will be.
I worry about my family's happiness.
I cry for my loved ones.
I am unique and exotic.

I understand I can't be the best.
I say life is and adventure.
I dream people will look up to me.
I try to be myself at school.
I hope to make it through life.
I am unique and exotic.



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Garrison123 said...
May 31, 2009 at 12:51 am:
I don't think exotic was the appropraite word to use here...
 
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ZiXiang Z. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 21, 2009 at 6:06 pm:
Hey there. Thanks for commenting on my Cannibal poem. Anyways, this poem is a good start...but the imageries used are a bit cliche and could be more vivid. I wish you the best! :)

-Z.Z
 
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