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If life were perfect
You'd be mine
If like were perfect
I wouldn't spend my time crying
Over you when
It's not worth trying
If I told you
That today was my last

Would you forget the past?
If the world were ending
Would you kiss me?
Or just leave me to die



Alone.





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Electricity This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 7, 2009 at 9:58 am
i can feel sadness in it. I can imagine a boy and a girl staring at each other while the world is ending, and the boy just taking off and running. Sad, and great job! You have talent for writing concisely.
 
amyxu said...
Jun. 15, 2009 at 7:33 pm
Powerful. And, more importantly, short. This especially showcases your writing talents, because it's really hard to get across so much in so few words. Great job!
 
xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 18, 2009 at 10:35 pm
Oh my gosh i love this! and i can relate. Really really really good job!
 
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