Once Upon A Time

May 11, 2009
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Once upon a time-
so cliche,
so used,
so unrealistic.

It's fiction,

fantasies,

false.

It begins wild stories about two in love,
fighting off villains and creatures,
persevering through it all.

It makes children dream of a magical world,
where everything and everyone is happy and nice.
Trees sing songs and birds do housework.
In The End everything is perfect.

Once upon a time-
so cliche,
so used,
so unrealistic.





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Norita_Spaznastic_Bumz said...
May 15, 2009 at 8:29 pm
Nice used of repeated stanzas (first and last) it makes an imprint in your work so the reader remembers it. I like it :]
 
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