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The clues are there; red blushing cheeks and
The obnoxious laughter and light giggles
My feelings for him are like a sweet candy with an undecided aftertaste
Like a fragrant candle that cannot be doused
Roars like the sight of a wildfire daring you to try and contain it
As my emotions run wild i feel safe, secure;loved




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Zoeybird96 said...
Oct. 1, 2009 at 5:01 pm:
to tell you the truth, it was ok. it could have been better. maybe you could write a poem about like losing a close friend or having the boy you like reject you.
 
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TaylorC said...
May 18, 2009 at 11:22 pm:
Please comment honest opinions
 
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TaylorC said...
May 18, 2009 at 11:20 pm:
Please comment and give me ideas for other poems and suggestions to make this one better. I also welcom honest opinions
 
Bunnie replied...
Oct. 24, 2009 at 10:58 am :
I really liked this poem. It shows the feelings you have for the person and really opens up the soul for more than just words. If you keep writing like this, I think you would be great!
 
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