May 10, 2009
By camille_1441 PLATINUM, Westerville, Ohio
camille_1441 PLATINUM, Westerville, Ohio
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It’s hard to let you in,
my hearts to win,
But the race keeps getting longer,
Are you getting any stronger?
I pull away the finish line,
please hurry up, don’t take your time.
Oh dear,
this is fear!
I’m trying to tell you something
but the words don’t come out.
I’m putting words together but I’m shutting my mouth.
The things about my life,
my family my friends,
I can’t play pretend,
You’re the boy that I adore.
So many secrets to tell,
So many angers to yell,
Crying in the rain,
Playing stupid games,
Putting up a fight,
Where’s my shining knight
In armor?
I don’t understand,
I have nothing planed,
to say.
My head has went and gone away.
My heart is here,
If you are here to stay.

The author's comments:
this is obviously about love any comments and feedback are very much appreciated. =)

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Jennax3 SILVER said...
on Aug. 17 2009 at 5:42 pm
Jennax3 SILVER, Palos Verdes Estates, California
6 articles 0 photos 114 comments
I can definitely feel the frustration in this poem. keep writing!!

amyxu said...
on Jun. 15 2009 at 7:01 pm
How sweet! I like the rhymes and the figurative language!

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