Right Hand, Left Hand

May 8, 2009
By KICK3593 PLATINUM, Roslyn Heights, New York
KICK3593 PLATINUM, Roslyn Heights, New York
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If only I could not
Be caught in the fault, I would
Enjoy that pleasure.
The clouds are waking into plans,
And I, I am no target,
Yet they had no pleasure, and a coming.
I feel no remorse for
Everything; they have simply retold my story.

Now…then…let…us…die…foreign…abstinence…con…tem…plate…
It’scomingIknowthatit’scomingbecuaseIwastrainedtoknowthesethings.



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on May. 18 2009 at 12:29 am
RheaD.Ravenfinger BRONZE, Juneau, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
1 Corinthians 13:4-8

I like this poem. The last line especially because it made me laugh. It reminded me when Garfield had WAY TOO much cafine in the morning and his words were all squished together talking about donuts and coffee. He always makes me laugh. Yea I like your poem. It's interesting.

on May. 15 2009 at 10:33 pm
KICK3593 PLATINUM, Roslyn Heights, New York
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Weird outcome. The last line's far down for some reason.

Now that I look at it, a lot of it seems screwed up.




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