Daddy’s Magic Act MAG

May 8, 2009
By HisTinyDancer GOLD, Mount Olive, North Carolina
HisTinyDancer GOLD, Mount Olive, North Carolina
14 articles 6 photos 12 comments

First you're there
Then you're gone
Nowhere to be found
Just when I think you're gone for good
You reappear
So suddenly I don't know what to think
And you bring someone with you
You say she's your wife
And that she's perfect for you
But I know the truth
She'll be gone within a year
And you'll do your magic act
Disappearing once again


The author's comments:
This is about how so many dads disappear, leaving their kids behind, and get a new life. Sometimes they come back but they always leave again, making their kids suffer so much more than they should.

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on Nov. 15 2009 at 3:03 pm
LexieMonster SILVER, Spring, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is a learning experience. Push yourself and you will grow." -Rami

I think it's really good, but moms do the same thing sometimes. My mom did

Roryl SILVER said...
on Nov. 3 2009 at 8:35 am
Roryl SILVER, Mt. Olive, North Carolina
7 articles 14 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
God whispers to us in our pleasures, speaks to us in our conscience, but shouts in our pains: it is His megaphone to rouse a deaf world. ~C.S. Lewis

Congrats on getting in the magazine! I'm so happy for you!

Roryl SILVER said...
on May. 17 2009 at 10:29 pm
Roryl SILVER, Mt. Olive, North Carolina
7 articles 14 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
God whispers to us in our pleasures, speaks to us in our conscience, but shouts in our pains: it is His megaphone to rouse a deaf world. ~C.S. Lewis

This poem is fabulous, Makenna! I love the way you described it as a magic act; very creative.


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