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Her soft shadow slowly soaked up the rain,
She saddened at the surreal sight of
summer's end.
The lowering limbs of the elongated
maple tree,
Leveled the likable dew that lingered
at its bend.

Slow yet subtle, the satisfaction of
seasonal change
Scattered sweetly among the sunset like ember.
And the lovely leaves that liberated loneliness
Only locked her thoughts into loving
late September.
leaves that liberated loneliness,
Only locked her thoughts into loving late September.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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Jaquie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 29, 2009 at 10:07 pm
Very nice. I really liked this piece. The alliterations in it were very nice, not to over-bearing that you can't read it aloud. It had a nice length and was not to confusing with its imagery. I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this piece.
God bless,
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padeeny said...
May 21, 2009 at 3:26 am
LOVE iT!! Very conscious writing.
 
indian010 said...
May 18, 2009 at 5:26 am
Lindsey=the best..dont forget that im the slamer and ur the writer : )
 
snc947 said...
May 15, 2009 at 7:23 pm
This is awesome! I love the way you create all the imagery in the piece. ;)
 
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