How I Really Feel

May 7, 2009
By AshleyAngel7 PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
AshleyAngel7 PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
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I bleed inside as my smile fakes you cold.
I'm numb and can't withhold a day without a tear a day without feeling hopeless,helpless,less than less.
Somedays I feel so numb stab me and watch my face stay the same.
My pain is so severe it hurts when I cry.
I hate myself so fat and ugly, I need help, someone to understand me.
I HATE hating myself, wanting to end my life, it sucks and sadly I suck.


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on May. 30 2009 at 11:37 pm
AshleyAngel7 PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
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I like your guys comments lol except the blunt stuff

on May. 30 2009 at 8:43 pm
AshleyAngel7 PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
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this is one of my 1st real pieces stop the meant critics gosh

on May. 15 2009 at 12:45 am
xxChampagnexxPetalsxx BRONZE, Camano Island, Washington
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By all the comments you have, i'm sure you've realized you're not alone. That may sound like crap to you, but its true. There is absolutely no way you are alone in your feelings. There are millions of people in this world. All of them at one point or another have felt like you for a myriad of different reasons. I've felt like that as well. Find a friend, or a parent, or someone and talk to them. It really truly helps.

on May. 14 2009 at 8:31 pm
banana PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
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If this is "How You Really Feel," then PLEASE PLEASE know that YOU ARE NOT ALONE!!!!!! Please believe me when I say that I have been through this, even though it wasn't my body that I hated - it was my mind and thoughts in general. Please believe me when I tell you that it really helps if you talk to someone professional! Don't believe you're ugly, because YOU ARE NOT. And don't believe you're insane, because YOU ARE NOT either. I used to be so scared of finally telling someone how I felt because I thought they'd sent me to some mental institution... but when I actually did talk to a counselor, I felt so much better. Please know that there is help out there... And you're poem is beautiful.

on May. 14 2009 at 8:16 pm
Catherine Hinshaw, Winston-Salem, North Carolina
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It is good that you can put your feelings in a poem... but if you really feel this way maybe you should consider seeing a counselor.

on May. 14 2009 at 5:55 pm
camille_1441 PLATINUM, Westerville, Ohio
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Well I know that a real writer never writes something without putting some of their own feelings into it so I give you a lot of credit for writing about how you actually feel. Please take care of yourself, If you click on my link there's a poem called Take my life I wrote that's got the same message but it's more hidden within the poem, your poem is good you just need to elaborate on it, let it all out, you should feel exausted, maybe even better about life once you've let it all out

Fraley said...
on May. 14 2009 at 5:29 pm
I believe in this is how you really feel don't hate yourself otherwise you'll never enjoy life

on May. 14 2009 at 3:54 pm
HisTinyDancer GOLD, Mount Olive, North Carolina
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I realy like it. I know exactly how that feels. Life Sucks.

ily said...
on May. 14 2009 at 2:58 pm
really you should change or take off the last three words and i agree with the dont be so blunt thing try to make it flow slowly and emotionally to the reader dont just throw the jagged rock right at there face :)

on May. 14 2009 at 5:16 am
Babydoll111 BRONZE, Forestville, Maryland
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its good and its different i like how you can post this type of stiff

on May. 14 2009 at 1:30 am
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

If this is for real just realize your not alone. Lots of people go through this and I've helped friends through stuff like this too. Talk to some friends= share your feelings. Become who you want to be or would like to be.

on May. 13 2009 at 3:43 am
its too blunt

if its a poem make it more poetic

not a monolaugue type piece




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