True Love

May 7, 2009
By jo-jo GOLD, Hammond, Indiana
jo-jo GOLD, Hammond, Indiana
11 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
They cant scare me if i scare them first


Being with you has made me realize what love is.
I was a fool before I found love in you.
Loves not lust, nor is it just a merly kiss.
It’s the way you feel and if it is true.
I remember our first night alone, just me and you
We laid on the grass and watched the sun-set.
The word love was not spoken because we already knew.
We woke up that morning feeling no regret.
Ever since that day we’ve been madly in love.
But now you’re gone and I’m lost without you.
Your bodies here but your souls up above
i guess the love we shared was already pass due.

I think of what could have been between you and me

I’ll never forget you, cause I love thee



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jo-jo GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 12:43 pm
jo-jo GOLD, Hammond, Indiana
11 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
They cant scare me if i scare them first

thank you so much! yes more guy do need to grow hearts!^^

on May. 13 2009 at 9:43 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

I LOVE this, it rhymes so well and has great rhythm, so sad, and so beautiful. I agree with Olympians, more guys should be like you! You wrote a wonderful, heart-wrenching poem, so keep it up.

Katie[: GOLD said...
on May. 13 2009 at 6:06 pm
Katie[: GOLD, Columbus, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Live life to the fullest, and like there won't be a tomorrow."

Aww that is sooooo sweet. See guys need to be more like you. You had your heart broken and that's okay. You will be loved no matter what. IF someone sayd they love you they will always mean it. There is no falling out of lovr. YOu will always have a small true passion for that person. So great good. And keep up the great poem writing.


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