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Breathing Glass

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As I breathe in the glass cuts my throat.
Im bleeding but it's not a medical issue.
Its Satan's blood, blacker than black, now filling newly owned property.
Everywhere the dark blood reaches, carresing the sharpest shards, I find myself to loathe.





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banana This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 14, 2009 at 8:34 pm
Au Contraire... I think this is an extremely beautiful poem. Yes, it's blunt - but it needs to be. So short and simple and yet so deep and moving. Keep it up!
 
MariaMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 14, 2009 at 1:32 am
It's ok but a bit blunt for a poem. Some people may like this style but try and smooth your lines together. -making them seem like they belong there.. try a bit of rhyme.
 
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