With Out You

May 7, 2009
By eddie lewis BRONZE, Hanford, California
eddie lewis BRONZE, Hanford, California
1 article 0 photos 0 comments

My heart stopped when i walked by you
you touched my hand and i felt i could fly
with u there was no limit,
not even a defied testify!
it was you!
you kept me in this world,
to live without you,
impossible to think
with out you
my whole life would sink
no possible way
my world would end
there would b no reason to fight
nothing else to say
my soul couldn't even descend
never able to reach the light
because with out you
my world would be gone
it would be total darkness without you!
but its OK, its OK
because i do have you!
and i'll never let u go!
because with out you
its hard to live
but its OK because i do have you!
i do have you and,
never have to live
With Out You!

The author's comments:
it was about my girlfriend, who i thought i could trust. but appearintly i do have to live without her next to me. o thought of shameless acts.

Similar Articles


This article has 1 comment.

on Jan. 12 2011 at 1:12 pm
Mostafa Al Hashash SILVER, Mansoura, Other
6 articles 0 photos 2 comments
I love it =D nice (Y)

MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!