Reflection

May 1, 2009
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The girl i stare at in the mirror,
She is beautiful
Her pale like skin dances with her green eyes
She has light oak brown hair and laces her soft cheeks
Her eyes are so full of life and happiness
She smiles at me with such kindness
Then i realized its me





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SpeakerofWolvesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 23 at 8:39 pm
SO BEAUTIFUL! I love the descriptive language especially the "light oak brown hair.." Awesome job and if you have any questions or need any help, just let me know and I would be more than happy to give you some ideas! :) -SpeakerofWolves
 
HammadWaseemThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 11 at 1:04 am
That's brilliant @sillygirl will you check and comment on my one video,"The Unbeatable Breakdancer", and two pics,"Cute Boy" and "Smart Guy"? :)
 
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