amazing poem

May 1, 2009
By jacob davis BRONZE, Belmont, Michigan
jacob davis BRONZE, Belmont, Michigan
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I remember when I used to stare,
And you just gave me that glassy glare.

Which always made my heart sink,
When I wished you would give me that special wink.

I’ve always really loved you,
I always thought we could be a happy two.

I think about you everyday,
I wish you thought I was okay.

All I want is for us to be together,
That special him and her.

You really are perfect for me,
But maybe we’re not meant to be.

The author's comments:
this was for the girl that i used to like and am now dating

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Mikal SILVER said...
on May. 16 2009 at 12:50 am
Mikal SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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I feel the same way about this girl in my class. She is hot!!! Check out my break up poem: A letter to love

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