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Winter's tears
April 30, 2009
A snowflake lands on my nose
My red cloak billows behind me
The wind is cold
My shoes leave prints in the snow
My red cloak billows behind me
A train sounds far away
My shoes leave prints in the snow
Tears run down my cheeks
A train sounds far away
Greif over takes me
Tears run down my cheeks
I come upon a graveyard
Greif over takes me
The sadness is too much
I come upon a graveyard
i fall to my knees at his grave
The sadness is to much
I start sobbing goodbye
I fall to my knees at his grave
The ground is cold and hard
I start sobbing goodbye
The wind is cold
I fall to my knees at his grave
A snowflake lands on my nose
© Yisrawayl G., Philadelphia, PA
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This article has 3 comments.
taffy17 said...
on Jun. 12 2009 at 7:38 pm
I'm glad you did this poem in the pantoum style. It suits the subject matter. Like "fallingtears" says, it's like a cycle, so it works perfectly.
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD said...
on Jun. 1 2009 at 2:45 am
This poem is really good! i love the writing style you use for some reason, it just seems like a never ending circle. great job!
