Winter's tears

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A snowflake lands on my nose
My red cloak billows behind me
The wind is cold
My shoes leave prints in the snow

My red cloak billows behind me
A train sounds far away
My shoes leave prints in the snow
Tears run down my cheeks

A train sounds far away
Greif over takes me
Tears run down my cheeks
I come upon a graveyard

Greif over takes me
The sadness is too much
I come upon a graveyard
i fall to my knees at his grave

The sadness is to much
I start sobbing goodbye
I fall to my knees at his grave
The ground is cold and hard

I start sobbing goodbye
The wind is cold
I fall to my knees at his grave
A snowflake lands on my nose





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Lilly275 said...
Jun. 19, 2009 at 11:23 pm
Thank you guys for commenting on my poems, i thought when i first heard a Pantoum style poem, I thought it was a beautiful cycle. SO thanks guys I hope you guys read my other poems. Thanks!
 
taffy17 said...
Jun. 12, 2009 at 7:38 pm
I'm glad you did this poem in the pantoum style. It suits the subject matter. Like "fallingtears" says, it's like a cycle, so it works perfectly.
 
xXxFallingTearsxXx said...
Jun. 1, 2009 at 2:45 am
This poem is really good! i love the writing style you use for some reason, it just seems like a never ending circle. great job!
 
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