friendship

April 30, 2009
By MimiRock96 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
MimiRock96 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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i dont want you
i need you
your not my friend
your my best friend
i dnt like you
i love you
and im glad i found you
Because i was absolutely
lost without you!


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on May. 9 2009 at 4:43 am
MisunderstoodBeauty BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
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very heart felt

on May. 9 2009 at 12:57 am
KICK3593 PLATINUM, Roslyn Heights, New York
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Your poem lacks plot. I am a harsh critic

jo-jo GOLD said...
on May. 8 2009 at 8:22 pm
jo-jo GOLD, Hammond, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
They cant scare me if i scare them first

This poem is so sweet

Roryl SILVER said...
on May. 8 2009 at 6:05 pm
Roryl SILVER, Mt. Olive, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
God whispers to us in our pleasures, speaks to us in our conscience, but shouts in our pains: it is His megaphone to rouse a deaf world. ~C.S. Lewis

I thought your poem was wonderful; very sweet and thoughtful. However, make sure you use proper grammar and spelling, please!

on May. 8 2009 at 4:55 pm
HisTinyDancer GOLD, Mount Olive, North Carolina
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OMG! I love it! I know exactly what you're talking about! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!

on May. 8 2009 at 1:58 pm
kaura123 SILVER, Huntington Beach, California
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thats a really cute poem. ithink your doing great.

on May. 8 2009 at 1:28 am
blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
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cool poem i was thinking of my best friend while i read it :)

on May. 7 2009 at 10:43 pm
ImDumbStruck DIAMOND, Springfield, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed, destroy any evidence."

this is nice. reminds me of my old best friend, too bad she moved...

on May. 7 2009 at 9:16 pm
MimiRock96 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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This is for all my friends




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