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hudson boy

By , derry, NH
baby, this is too real
i need to tell you how i feel.
then i see her
and the thought of us is a blurr.
i really wanna be with you,
so i can be your boo.
we can kiss and reminisce
if only she wasn't here
then you'd have nothing to fear.
she treats you like dirt
and you end up getting hurt.
i'll treat you right baby
i hate always having to think just maybe.
lets try it out
you shouldn't have to go without.
you're my joy and my little hudson boy





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danyellxxd said...
Sept. 16, 2009 at 7:19 pm
exacly! I'm glad you liked itt. :)
 
Jennifer B. said...
Sept. 16, 2009 at 6:08 pm
This is great, I know how it feels to see someone else with another person that you think they shouldn't be with, like how you could treat them so much better
 
danyellxxd replied...
Sept. 16, 2009 at 7:19 pm
exacly! I'm glad you liked itt. :)
 
Jennifer B. replied...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 7:23 pm
you should read some of my stuff. I know it feels great when you get a good response to your work.
 
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