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Do not take my smile away
with your animosity
towards all things beautiful
Do not replace my smile
with a frown when
you belittle me
to the point of irritation.
You wish to instigate
a war between
my happiness and
your misery
but it is a
war I
cannot
bear for
you
to
win...



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IRUEHL said...
Apr. 25, 2011 at 6:29 pm:
Your style is great! i love all of your works and just wanted to say keep writting! :)
 
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normgrl said...
Apr. 4, 2011 at 6:33 pm:

After feeling a tad guilty for being rude about an old story of yours, I decided to read more of your work. And I wasn't disappointed. :) Especially after reading this poem of yours. Not only is it beautiful like the others mentioned, but it's also very easy to relate to.

Good job & Keep Writing,

...normgrl

 
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sasssgirrrl22 said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 7:22 pm:

this is very deep. i luvv it.

i can relate, so it makes it more

powerful 2 read. really pretty;)

 
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ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 12:07 pm:
Very pretty.
 
Evvyon replied...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 9:01 pm :
Thank you very much that means a lot to me :D
 
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caughtinaxm0ment said...
Jan. 18, 2010 at 11:44 pm:
I like your style a lot, & I can definetley relate to this piece (:
 
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