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i have loved you
but you broke my heart
now we dont speak
we have grtown apart
i want to forgive you
but i will never forget you
or what you did
you say your sorry
why do i belive you
why do i care
i guess its beacuse i love you still and wish you were here





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KICK3593 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 5, 2009 at 2:23 am
Are you feeling so worthless that you would lowercase your own 'I'? There's some tragedy. Other than that, I'm reading too much of this...
 
bookhugger14 said...
May 5, 2009 at 1:52 am
hey i am sorry that this poem was inspired by something that must have been hard, but it really was good! keep writing
 
bakinboy1 said...
May 5, 2009 at 12:08 am
i like it - nice work...
 
:PBUBBLES:P said...
May 4, 2009 at 11:45 pm
I love this, it's so true. Very rhythmic, I liked how you rhymed some lines and didn't rhyme others. LOVE IT!
 
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