You

April 23, 2009
By Kaitlynne BRONZE, Longview, Washington
Kaitlynne BRONZE, Longview, Washington
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i have loved you
but you broke my heart
now we dont speak
we have grtown apart
i want to forgive you
but i will never forget you
or what you did
you say your sorry
why do i belive you
why do i care
i guess its beacuse i love you still and wish you were here


The author's comments:
i wrote this poem after my boyfriend broke up with me

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on May. 5 2009 at 2:23 am
KICK3593 PLATINUM, Roslyn Heights, New York
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Are you feeling so worthless that you would lowercase your own 'I'? There's some tragedy. Other than that, I'm reading too much of this...

on May. 5 2009 at 1:52 am
bookhugger14 SILVER, Delta, Ohio
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hey i am sorry that this poem was inspired by something that must have been hard, but it really was good! keep writing

on May. 5 2009 at 12:08 am
bakinboy1 BRONZE, New York, New York
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i like it - nice work...

on May. 4 2009 at 11:45 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

I love this, it's so true. Very rhythmic, I liked how you rhymed some lines and didn't rhyme others. LOVE IT!


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