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My body laid across
this giant dart board
go ahead, throw one
Farther out, leaves scars
the heart is bullseye
hit it to make
me die again





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MariaMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 17, 2009 at 4:02 pm
I like it, and the challenged confidence you give is good.. though it is a little blunt for my taste. The end is really good, nice and gets the point wrapped up.
 
xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 5, 2009 at 10:49 pm
First impression: dark
second look: totally know what you're saying.
I love this! At first it was a little hard to understand, but its really neat and... did i mention i love this poem?
 
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