Dartboard of death

April 20, 2009
By Borrelli SILVER, Little Rock, Arkansas
Borrelli SILVER, Little Rock, Arkansas
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My body laid across
this giant dart board
go ahead, throw one
Farther out, leaves scars
the heart is bullseye
hit it to make
me die again


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on Jun. 17 2009 at 4:02 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

I like it, and the challenged confidence you give is good.. though it is a little blunt for my taste. The end is really good, nice and gets the point wrapped up.

on May. 5 2009 at 10:49 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

First impression: dark

second look: totally know what you're saying.

I love this! At first it was a little hard to understand, but its really neat and... did i mention i love this poem?




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