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If I had never felt it
I would never feel
Like I don’t have it
I felt warmth
Your hug, your body
Was warm
Now I feel cold
Icy and miserable
My teeth chatter
When I’m in the
Arms of anyone else
My world is frozen-over
Just a hug from you
And I realize I had forgotten
Again how good it feels
I never want to let go
But I know I have to
And so I return to my frozen
Existence
A little bit colder than before





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xxJustxxMe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 7, 2009 at 10:41 pm
i did an edit to this-

If I had never felt it
I would never feel
Like I don’t have it
I felt warmth
Your hug, your body
Was warm
Now I feel cold
Icy and miserable
My teeth chatter
When I’m in the
Arms of anyone else
My world is frozen-over
Just a hug from you
And I remember
Again how good it feels
To be held by you
I never want to let go
But I know I have to
And... (more »)
 
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