A Little Bit Colder

April 15, 2009
By ImDumbStruck DIAMOND, Springfield, Virginia
ImDumbStruck DIAMOND, Springfield, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed, destroy any evidence."


If I had never felt it
I would never feel
Like I don’t have it
I felt warmth
Your hug, your body
Was warm
Now I feel cold
Icy and miserable
My teeth chatter
When I’m in the
Arms of anyone else
My world is frozen-over
Just a hug from you
And I realize I had forgotten
Again how good it feels
I never want to let go
But I know I have to
And so I return to my frozen
Existence
A little bit colder than before



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on May. 7 2009 at 10:41 pm
ImDumbStruck DIAMOND, Springfield, Virginia
61 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed, destroy any evidence."

i did an edit to this-



If I had never felt it

I would never feel

Like I don’t have it

I felt warmth

Your hug, your body

Was warm

Now I feel cold

Icy and miserable

My teeth chatter

When I’m in the

Arms of anyone else

My world is frozen-over

Just a hug from you

And I remember

Again how good it feels

To be held by you

I never want to let go

But I know I have to

And so I return to my frozen

Existence

A little bit colder than before




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