Pricey. Priceless.

April 13, 2009
Give me a penny, and you’ll know my thoughts.
Give me a nickel, and I’ll give you a pickle.
Give me a dime, and it’ll buy you time.
Give me a quarter, and I’ll cut your hair shorter.
Give me a dollar, and I’ll fix your collar.
Give me your love, and I’ll give you mine.

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sallyloco said...
Jun. 17, 2009 at 11:37 pm
loved this poem.
amyxu said...
Jun. 5, 2009 at 7:10 pm
hbwriter This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 28, 2009 at 8:08 pm
I liked the last line, but the middle of the poem is kinda nonsense. Great repetition!
Miaoru said...
May 18, 2009 at 6:14 pm
I like your repetition in the poem. Also, very creative and thoughtful.

(Btw, thanks for the comments and opinions in my work)
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