Pricey. Priceless.

April 13, 2009
By PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
105 articles 5 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make grape juice, then watch everyone wonder how you did it!


Give me a penny, and you’ll know my thoughts.
Give me a nickel, and I’ll give you a pickle.
Give me a dime, and it’ll buy you time.
Give me a quarter, and I’ll cut your hair shorter.
Give me a dollar, and I’ll fix your collar.
Give me your love, and I’ll give you mine.


The author's comments:
Analysis line-by-line:
"Penny for your thoughts"- that's why penny doesn't rhyme.
Nickel-pickle- only because it rhymed.
Dime-time- more time in a relationship.
Quarter- shorter hair- at the hair cutter's place.
Dollar- collar- they're not that easy to fix.
Last line? Kind of up to you.

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on Jun. 17 2009 at 11:37 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

loved this poem.

amyxu said...
on Jun. 5 2009 at 7:10 pm
Cute.

on May. 28 2009 at 8:08 pm
hbwriter SILVER, Chapel Hill, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's time to trust my instincts, close my eyes, and leap!

I liked the last line, but the middle of the poem is kinda nonsense. Great repetition!

Miaoru said...
on May. 18 2009 at 6:14 pm
Miaoru, Sunnyside, New York
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I like your repetition in the poem. Also, very creative and thoughtful.



(Btw, thanks for the comments and opinions in my work)


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