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July Darkness MAG

April 20, 2009
By allison body BRONZE, Chesterfield, Missouri
allison body BRONZE, Chesterfield, Missouri
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Tall grass sweeps the stars
As night presses silent fields
And the wind whispers summer.


The author's comments:
This is a sound poem.

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on Dec. 14 2009 at 9:44 pm
chrisbriones GOLD, Anaheim, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I believe nothing can be justly and completely explained by words."

could you please read my poem? id enjoy feedback.

on Dec. 14 2009 at 9:44 pm
chrisbriones GOLD, Anaheim, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I believe nothing can be justly and completely explained by words."

conciseness: the use of only words necessary.

i can feel the air, the wind.

on Dec. 14 2009 at 11:17 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

very pretty.

on Apr. 29 2009 at 12:40 am
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

This is really good. it's simple but it still says everything it nees to say. Good Job. Check out some of my poems too!