river

April 20, 2009
By Anonymous

The eyes meet,
One word said,
It's like riding a river,
it's smooth and rough,
Intense and weak,
it's love at first sight,
just one night.


The author's comments:
Made it up on the spot

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on Apr. 28 2009 at 1:17 pm
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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i think that this is awesome u r really good at desribing how love is like a river, (right?) and i think it was awesome.

on Apr. 27 2009 at 3:22 am
jennnnnnn BRONZE, Irvine, California
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i like it. its concise, which is cool.



but i have little to no idea what you're talking about. hahahah



i think if you work on it, it could be something really great (:


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