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The eyes meet,
One word said,
It's like riding a river,
it's smooth and rough,
Intense and weak,
it's love at first sight,
just one night.





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MorningStar15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 28, 2009 at 1:17 pm
i think that this is awesome u r really good at desribing how love is like a river, (right?) and i think it was awesome.
 
jennnnnnn This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 27, 2009 at 3:22 am
i like it. its concise, which is cool.

but i have little to no idea what you're talking about. hahahah

i think if you work on it, it could be something really great (:
 
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