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Remembering The Pain

I’m starting to remember
All the pain you put me through
All the things you said
Your could but wouldn’t do
And as much as it seems
That I wouldn’t give in
I’m screaming on my knees
Trying hard as hell to mend
I’ve tried to apologize
But my tongue agrees with my pride
There’s not much left for you to do
So why don’t you just stand aside
I mean your good at it
Hurting everything that’s breakable
But don’t touch me
Because it’s merely practical
My heart is too starved
And my mind has slithered away
But I know I’ll still follow you
Be loyal every single day
Just because you can’t deal
Doesn’t mean I can’t care
And even though you hurt me
My love, I’ll still share





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BeccaBlue826 said...
Jun. 2, 2009 at 4:48 pm
just so everyone knows this isn't about a guy...
 
nxexnxaxj said...
May 6, 2009 at 12:34 am
cute! veri deep last lines are amazing
 
jennnnnnn This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 29, 2009 at 12:35 am
soooo i dont know why but the rest of your comment takes forever to load haha but based on what i read, i definitely know what you're talking about. i mean, its hard enough to write about stuff thats super personal, so like to make another person understand and get them to know how you feel is even more difficult. but hey, you're doing a great job so keep it up :)
 
jennnnnnn This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 27, 2009 at 3:32 am
this is really good.

the last four lines are really powerful, and i think a lot of people can relate to that, loving someone even though they broke your heart.

itd be great if you could check out my poems/pictures! k thanks (:
 
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