These Two Girls

April 19, 2009
The flower pedals soar through the air.
The same wind waves in her hair.
This girl, she's life
Wearing nothing but white.
Her soul shows through her smile,
Her light can be seen for a mile.
She is never-ending,
She will live on forever.

The ash dust floats through the skies.
The same fire torches her insides.
This girl, she's morbid
Wearing nothing, just black, ready to attack.
Her soul is gone,
She can't be seen at all.
She is slowly dying,
She is limited on time...

The differences of these two girls
Are a shadow of their adolescent truth,
An umbrage of what they were in their youth…
Opposites, heartache, and lack of meaning in this world,
May be the most destructive things in it.





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robbierob said...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 9:40 am
This is really good, I HOPE U CONTINUE TO KEEP WRITING. DONT LET ALL THE DRAMA WIT UR MOM AND HER LIFE GET U DOWN TTYL
 
Violet_X said...
Jul. 4, 2009 at 8:24 am
Wow. Nice. Haha. I fail at poetry but, it was interesting. nice...

(Btw I found this on my boyfriend's myspace comments, sorry. :p)
 
Michelle <3 said...
May 12, 2009 at 10:12 pm
Oh wow! i love it mitch :) it's so good :) i'm so glad your writing agian.
love to read more,
Michelle<3
 
xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 5, 2009 at 10:28 pm
Interesting. i don't know what else to say except that its really good. It's very intriguing. Keep writing!
 
cj said...
May 5, 2009 at 3:39 pm
Mitch very nice, keep it up.
I liked it. =]
 
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