Secrets

By
More by this author
There they go
Whisper, whisper, whiper
They are all around
Knowing something about everyone
They can hurt you
They can embarress you
There thee go again
Whisper, whisper, whisper
They can make you know
They can make you happy
Whisper, whisper, whisper
They can make you fell many ways
They are secrets
And they may form a big maze





Join the Discussion

This article has 2 comments. Post your own now!

Mushroom:) said...
Apr. 26, 2009 at 11:49 pm
I really like your topic choice. Good work
 
EdytD said...
Apr. 26, 2009 at 4:17 pm
not bad! What I would do is put more concrete imagery into it - instead of saying what secrets can do, describe the faces of people who are hurt b/c of their secrets.
I like the idea of a maze, though - it's a good comparison. :)
 
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback