Secrets

April 9, 2009
By Megan Craven BRONZE, New Berlin, Illinois
Megan Craven BRONZE, New Berlin, Illinois
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There they go
Whisper, whisper, whiper
They are all around
Knowing something about everyone
They can hurt you
They can embarress you
There thee go again
Whisper, whisper, whisper
They can make you know
They can make you happy
Whisper, whisper, whisper
They can make you fell many ways
They are secrets
And they may form a big maze


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on Apr. 26 2009 at 11:49 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

I really like your topic choice. Good work

EdytD SILVER said...
on Apr. 26 2009 at 4:17 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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not bad! What I would do is put more concrete imagery into it - instead of saying what secrets can do, describe the faces of people who are hurt b/c of their secrets.

I like the idea of a maze, though - it's a good comparison. :)


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