Quiet Smiles

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Your quiet smiles
make me wonder who you really are
your a world to yourself
someone never before known

whispers surround you
and darkness runs

your a world to yourself
simple thoughts
causing the hearts to move
small and weak
but so special to him

careless are the words
spoken for the unnamed

broken and shattered
they shall always remain
for noone knows the future
and your past unchanged





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LaylaViolet said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 4:27 pm
Whoa, totally cool. I don't really understand the entire message/emotion, but the last stanza i really love. A+
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 3:18 pm
Darnnnnnnnnn! This is sooooooo goood. Omg! Wowwwww.
 
Jatavion said...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 8:46 pm
I feel that this was very well written because it's a great surface poem, but then you can also go back and analyze it and it's still amazing. Great job, 5 stars :)
 
TheWrittenHeart said...
Dec. 20, 2009 at 8:36 pm
I agree, this is really really good :)
 
musicgirl757 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 26, 2009 at 2:35 am
nice....... you know what? I really like this! this is really amazing!
 
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