Quiet Smiles

April 9, 2009
By Shannon_ GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
Shannon_ GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
12 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
For we are the children of The Lost Generation and Truth is blind.


Your quiet smiles
make me wonder who you really are
your a world to yourself
someone never before known

whispers surround you
and darkness runs

your a world to yourself
simple thoughts
causing the hearts to move
small and weak
but so special to him

careless are the words
spoken for the unnamed

broken and shattered
they shall always remain
for noone knows the future
and your past unchanged


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LaylaViolet said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 4:27 pm
Whoa, totally cool. I don't really understand the entire message/emotion, but the last stanza i really love. A+

on Jan. 19 2010 at 3:18 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Darnnnnnnnnn! This is sooooooo goood. Omg! Wowwwww.

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Jan. 15 2010 at 8:46 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

I feel that this was very well written because it's a great surface poem, but then you can also go back and analyze it and it's still amazing. Great job, 5 stars :)

Heart SILVER said...
on Dec. 20 2009 at 8:36 pm
Heart SILVER, Arcadia, California
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I agree, this is really really good :)

IRBFGW DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 26 2009 at 2:35 am
IRBFGW DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
53 articles 1 photo 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hey, assbutt!" Supernatural, Castiel.

nice....... you know what? I really like this! this is really amazing!


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