Wish

All I ever wanted to know
was that wish that you muttered
before you blew
the dandelion seeds
away
to find their own path--
their own life.





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quietscorpio91 said...
May 2, 2009 at 12:12 am
Thanks! I wanted to write something quoiet, but still get a message across. I'm glad you liked it.
 
Ruthey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 25, 2009 at 2:43 pm
i really like this. it's simple which i think is great, and original idea as well!
 
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