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Without your voice
I don't know where I'd be
I thank you for the memories
I know I'm like a puzzle
Always needing new help
Your my life
Always giving
New suprises and wonders





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EmC725 said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 4:05 pm
I like your message! Personally, I would like to see the third line move to the end of the poem; I think it would make more sense and would add more power. Good job.
 
Jatavion said...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 8:44 pm
I liked this. Good job :)
One minor thing I want to point out: In the line that says "Your my life," It's "YOU'RE my life."
 
Shannon_ replied...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 7:48 am
true... thanks lol
 
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