An Almost Love Poem

April 7, 2009
By Quinney GOLD, Rantoul, Illinois
Quinney GOLD, Rantoul, Illinois
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I want to write you a love poem
but nothing seems to turn out right
there are no words to describe
how you make me feel
how with only one smile
you can change my mood on a bad day
no matter what I write
it doesn't capture
how I truely feel
my heart stops for a second
and my soul seems to leap
every time I look into your eyes
but there is no way to put
so much on one piece of paper
with just one smile,
one look, one kiss
you have stolen my heart
and with that it is yours forever
I wanted to write you a love poem
but I guess this will have to do
I want you to know that I
truely, madly, deeply love you


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on Apr. 21 2009 at 3:53 am
GreyEyesBlueHair GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Develop interest in life as you see it; in people, things, literature, music - the world is so rich, simply throbbing with rich treasures, beautiful souls and interesting people. Forget yourself." Henry Miller

Very cute! I loved the rythm! Also,



"I wanted to write you a love poem

but I guess this will have to do

I want you to know that I

truely, madly, deeply love you"



Very sweet and the last line tops your poem off perfectly! :)

on Apr. 21 2009 at 12:46 am
This is the most heartfelt, powerful, and romantic thing I've ever read! This guy sounds like he's lucky to have found you!




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