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Love is like a flower,
Though sometimes it goes sour,
So beautiful and colourful,
Always love is wonderful.

Love is like a diamond,
It's the strongest thing around,
Love reflects all that is good and light,
Love truly is contrite.

Love is like the sun,
Two people joined as one,
United through all strife,
Essential for all life.

Now that I've found you,
I'll give you my heart and love true.





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swimstar28 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 6:21 pm
simply beautiful! I love the rhyme scheme!
 
Inkspired replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 6:23 pm
thanks, it's a sonnet :) we had to write these in grade 8, and I wrote like ten
 
swimstar28 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 6:24 pm
I remember writing those! Poetry is tough!
 
Inkspired replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 6:26 pm
yeah, it is :) but it's so much fun to write!
 
swimstar28 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 6:30 pm
yeah i wrote one poem and it was SO much fun! plus yours makes me want to write more lol
 
Inkspired replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 6:32 pm
That happens to me all the time! I always want to write something after reading stuff on teen ink!
 
swimstar28 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 6:34 pm
me too! Inspiration to the MAX!
 
Quiera_ser_adorado<3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 12:21 pm
this is adorable! keep writing :)
 
Cat_Art101 said...
Oct. 25, 2009 at 6:01 pm
I love this! I love the way you rhymed the poem; it was very original. Great use of vocabulary, too. Like I said, this is a great poem! :)
Oh, and thanks for all the comments! They mean a lot!
 
bluemagnet22 said...
Oct. 20, 2009 at 9:30 am
I like it:) it has a great flow and rythem! Oh n thanx for commenting on my poem:)
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 1:29 pm
You know what's funny i just read this poem n didn't realize i had read it before n i was like this is the cutest poem ever lol i was totally amused then i went to comment n was like hey wait i've read this b4 lol
 
PK4evr This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 28, 2009 at 11:03 pm
Cute! I usually hate rhyming but it was very good in this poem. I loved the word "strife"- not used much anymore although it should be... :). Anyway good job and thanks for reviewing my stuff!
 
ErumK said...
Aug. 28, 2009 at 1:04 pm
I cannot get over how you can actually rhyme well. I can't do that to save my life. =P
Good job!
 
windswift This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 23, 2009 at 4:29 am
well like usual when it comes to love poems there just not my thing, but i still love how you can twist the words to your making, keep it up and one day words will come to you like fish to sea. there may be a few rarities were your simply stumped, but most thing will be yours for the taking.
 
Jewels said...
May 1, 2009 at 4:58 pm
GREAT. very nice....I REALLY LIKE IT
 
:PBUBBLES:P said...
Apr. 28, 2009 at 10:46 pm
Thanks so much guys!!!
 
Kumang said...
Apr. 26, 2009 at 11:12 am
wow, you do better rhymes than me. its a good one.. :-)
 
twix4baybay said...
Apr. 25, 2009 at 6:15 pm
This is a wonderful piece of work! Good job and gerat discription
 
adriannalovesanime said...
Apr. 25, 2009 at 5:58 pm
I love this:D
 
cassie said...
Apr. 25, 2009 at 5:59 am
I LOVED THIS POEM! Your like a professional!
 
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