Love

April 6, 2009
By Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov


Love is like a flower,
Though sometimes it goes sour,
So beautiful and colourful,
Always love is wonderful.

Love is like a diamond,
It's the strongest thing around,
Love reflects all that is good and light,
Love truly is contrite.

Love is like the sun,
Two people joined as one,
United through all strife,
Essential for all life.

Now that I've found you,
I'll give you my heart and love true.



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on Feb. 22 2010 at 6:34 pm
ReneetheGreat PLATINUM, Castle Rock, Colorado
28 articles 3 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Strength does not come from physical capacity, but from an indomitable will."

me too! Inspiration to the MAX!

on Feb. 22 2010 at 6:32 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

That happens to me all the time! I always want to write something after reading stuff on teen ink!

on Feb. 22 2010 at 6:30 pm
ReneetheGreat PLATINUM, Castle Rock, Colorado
28 articles 3 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Strength does not come from physical capacity, but from an indomitable will."

yeah i wrote one poem and it was SO much fun! plus yours makes me want to write more lol

on Feb. 22 2010 at 6:26 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

yeah, it is :) but it's so much fun to write!

on Feb. 22 2010 at 6:24 pm
ReneetheGreat PLATINUM, Castle Rock, Colorado
28 articles 3 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Strength does not come from physical capacity, but from an indomitable will."

I remember writing those! Poetry is tough!

on Feb. 22 2010 at 6:23 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

thanks, it's a sonnet :) we had to write these in grade 8, and I wrote like ten

on Feb. 22 2010 at 6:21 pm
ReneetheGreat PLATINUM, Castle Rock, Colorado
28 articles 3 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Strength does not come from physical capacity, but from an indomitable will."

simply beautiful! I love the rhyme scheme!

on Nov. 11 2009 at 12:21 pm
KaraTaylor DIAMOND, Neptune, New Jersey
81 articles 17 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"life isn't a matter of milestones, but of moments"

"experience is the name everyone gives to their mistakes."

"be as you wish to seem."

"it's better to be hated for what you are, than to be loved for what you are not."

this is adorable! keep writing :)

on Nov. 5 2009 at 1:29 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

You know what's funny i just read this poem n didn't realize i had read it before n i was like this is the cutest poem ever lol i was totally amused then i went to comment n was like hey wait i've read this b4 lol

on Oct. 25 2009 at 6:01 pm
AspireToInspire SILVER, Thornville, Ohio
8 articles 2 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Praepartur animus contra omnia. ♥

I love this! I love the way you rhymed the poem; it was very original. Great use of vocabulary, too. Like I said, this is a great poem! :)

Oh, and thanks for all the comments! They mean a lot!

on Oct. 20 2009 at 9:30 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

I like it:) it has a great flow and rythem! Oh n thanx for commenting on my poem:)

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on Aug. 28 2009 at 11:03 pm
PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
105 articles 5 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make grape juice, then watch everyone wonder how you did it!

Cute! I usually hate rhyming but it was very good in this poem. I loved the word "strife"- not used much anymore although it should be... :). Anyway good job and thanks for reviewing my stuff!

ErumK said...
on Aug. 28 2009 at 1:04 pm
ErumK, Bayan, Other
0 articles 0 photos 10 comments
I cannot get over how you can actually rhyme well. I can't do that to save my life. =P

Good job!

on May. 23 2009 at 4:29 am
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
80 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.

well like usual when it comes to love poems there just not my thing, but i still love how you can twist the words to your making, keep it up and one day words will come to you like fish to sea. there may be a few rarities were your simply stumped, but most thing will be yours for the taking.

Jewels SILVER said...
on May. 1 2009 at 4:58 pm
Jewels SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
7 articles 2 photos 4 comments
GREAT. very nice....I REALLY LIKE IT

on Apr. 28 2009 at 10:46 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

Thanks so much guys!!!

on Apr. 26 2009 at 11:12 am
Kumanga DIAMOND, Bethel, Alaska
56 articles 0 photos 95 comments

Favorite Quote:
Always Accept nd love urself for who u are!

wow, you do better rhymes than me. its a good one.. :-)

twix4baybay said...
on Apr. 25 2009 at 6:15 pm
This is a wonderful piece of work! Good job and gerat discription

on Apr. 25 2009 at 5:58 pm
adriannalovesanime GOLD, Reidsville, North Carolina
17 articles 5 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's better to be hurt by the truth than to gain satisfaction from the lies.-David Allan

I love this:D

cassie said...
on Apr. 25 2009 at 5:59 am
I LOVED THIS POEM! Your like a professional!


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