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The eyes of Kiru

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Yolie S.
The eyes of Kiru
Summary: In this story, A college-level girl genius, Kiru, who lives in a normal everyday life like most teens except she hides the secret that she's a genius. She struggles to keep her secret hidden from anyone but her family, she has succeeded until to the climax of her friend's kidnapping.





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Barnowl14 said...
Nov. 8, 2013 at 4:12 pm:
I like it, but I'm finding it's a little bit hard to read because of the huge paragraphs. Other then tat, it's good!
 
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Amieblossom said...
Oct. 22, 2011 at 10:22 pm:
Haha. I love it. Her sarcasm and thought make me laugh. I love the originality of her name also. Keep going, you're doing great.
 
Imperfectlife replied...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 5:16 pm :
Thank you so much for reading my story!
 
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Imperfectlife said...
Oct. 22, 2011 at 10:36 am:
Hi! I'm the writer here, Yolie S. and I hope you like this story here. Do please read it and ask me if you want more updates for this story.
 
Imperfectlife replied...
Oct. 22, 2011 at 11:23 am :
you can give critques, I need them to make my story better.
 
WOWritingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 11 at 1:35 pm :
It's really great! But maybe there's too much info that you don't need? It's still quite good tho. 
 
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