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Burned

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Alexandra N.
Burned
Summary: I wake up, suddenly wondering when I went to sleep, where I went to sleep. Then I take in my surroundings, my slightly burnt, thin and leathery suit with deep red sneakers my long braided black and red hair and my ridged and scratched painted red nails, and I realize I am not in London anymore. Yet still I am surrounded by a breathtaking view. There are beautiful flowers, snowdrop, primrose, daffodils, daisies, hawthorn, roses, larkspur, poppies, aster, calendula, chrysanthemum, narcissus and a flower


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If you read this please comment, because I am making a long story. I hope all you talented writers will give me some advice! I have other parts to add, please tell me if I should post some. My Idol is Suzanne Collins HUNGER GAMES FOREVER!!! I cannot place. I feel a sudden tingling sensation in my entire body, and then the most frightening thing that I could think of happens to me, I forget everything except that I am Kayla...





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ValWiggin said...
Oct. 20, 2011 at 4:12 pm:
really good, but so much like the hunger games
 
ArrowHeart replied...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 12:18 pm :
I know I just loved the plot about that story. I'm sorry I took so long to respond, with a new quarter of school comes more issues socially and educationally. But anyways thanks for commenting! :)
 
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