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Vampire Goddess

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Kristine J.
Vampire Goddess
Summary: "The less you know about me, the better everything will turn out."I told him.
"But, there's something different about you! What is it!"He asked, his eyes pleading.
I held up my hands, pain in my mouth.
"Nothing!"I snapped.
I spun around and dashed back inside, my fangs slid over my teeth and bottom lip. I felt thirsty, I needed blood. I slid down the wall and groaned. I was so weak. I was so hungry. I closed my eyes and groaned in hunger again. I needed to feed.





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bri-br said...
Nov. 5 at 4:28 pm
the first sentence got me hooked
 
ShyKarma said...
Apr. 20, 2013 at 5:33 pm
love the story could you write more chapters  
 
KristySparklez replied...
Apr. 22, 2013 at 3:24 pm
Of course!!!! not a problem!! As soon as I am able, I will!!!!
 
ShyKarma replied...
Apr. 27, 2013 at 3:40 pm
awsome     
 
shy.. said...
Jan. 25, 2013 at 11:56 pm
you should write more i want to know what will happen next :)
 
KristySparklez replied...
Jan. 27, 2013 at 10:19 pm
I will definitey write more!!! as soon i possible can(: Thank you!!! just keep an eye out for more!!!
 
emilybwrites said...
Aug. 13, 2011 at 3:37 pm
great job i loved it! could you check out my peom "Forgotten Domain" and comment/rate! it would mean a lot!!!
 
Jonesychic replied...
Sept. 23, 2011 at 3:18 pm
sure thing! ill get right on it!
 
spiritofdeath said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 3:24 pm
I really enjoyed it! I never been such a fan of vampire novels, but now I think I'm changed! :) Keep it up!
 
Jonesychic replied...
Jun. 3, 2012 at 2:13 am
I'm glad to hear that! I'll be working on it more!
 
littlemisssarbear said...
Jul. 11, 2011 at 5:24 am
I like your instinctive and imaginative work :D it had an atmosphere about it that keeps readers wanting more and more until they split into two :) keep going...I'll be keeping tabs on your work ahaa :D
 
KristySparklez replied...
Feb. 2, 2013 at 9:57 pm
Thank you so much! And I will definitey be wrting more as soon i get more inspiration(:
 
Angelnight16 said...
Jun. 23, 2011 at 3:06 pm
i've only read the first chapter so far, and i think its sweet. only i think you might want to vary your word choice, and add a few more descriptions. but other than that keep up the good work!!
 
Jonesychic replied...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 9:36 pm
thanks!!! i really appreciate it!!! ill be posting more as soon as i can!!!
 

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