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The Darkest time

Rachel M.
The Darkest time

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BjornNorth said...
Sept. 4, 2015 at 5:32 pm
It's never easy, starting to write, or continuing to write and it takes a huge amount of courage to post something you've written and that you care about for others to read and comment on. So, congratulations for overcoming those obstacles. Now, your story. Just a few things, proof reading helps immensely. It takes care of all those pesky misspellings, incorrect word choices, and wrong usage issues. Also, consider working on your tense agreement. This can be very jarring, to have clashing, disa... (more »)
CGirl1118 said...
May 21, 2013 at 8:56 pm
I loved it except you rushed things too much. Draw it out a little more. Also can't wait for more!!!!

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