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War of Time

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Brett G.
War of Time
Summary: Eve Smithsion has known about Vampires and Killers since she found out she WAS a Guard at a young age. And meeting a sexy vampire named Mickel will make her chose a side to be with Mickel and help the vampires stay safe from the Killers or stay by her Fathers side in defending the humans from any rouge vampires lurking around. And a betrayal will force her to make a difficult decision.





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Ashley_Tucker said...
May 23, 2011 at 2:46 pm:
It seemed good, but I eventually stopped. You have alot of spelling errors that make it hard to read. Also, try to slow down the story. The first chapter could have easily been dragged out to 15 pages, but you shortened it to 1. Read my novel called Shaya's Story, please! (:
 
BrettJolene replied...
Jun. 5, 2011 at 3:47 pm :
thanks! i guess its kind of only a first  draft thanks for reading as much as u did tho :)
 
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