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Vengeance

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Sidney S.
Vengeance
Summary: Ryan was attacked by a group of boys when he was 16-and they turned him into a demon. Now he's out for blood-the blood of his friend Adam's tormenters.

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Aug. 15, 2011 at 12:50 pm:
thx! i've decided that i'm gonna rewrite this anyway. i appreciate your comment!
 
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CobraHeaded said...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 1:31 am:
Whoa! This has an immense concept, and I really like where you went with Ryan, Max, and Adam, but what was the story mainly about? Adam and Melissa, and their story? Or was it mainly about Ryan, and how he became a demon? Also, the tempo went very fast in this. I think it would have been a good idea to maybe give more details, and turn this into chapters. I'm dieing to read more! I hope this isn't where it all ends!
 
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