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Michael K.
Activation Code
Summary: It is the year 2381. Computers have taken over the world. But a rebellion is stirring against the computer dictatorship. This is the thrilling story about the leader of the rebellion and his quest to topple the empire.





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quatorze said...
Feb. 24, 2013 at 8:02 pm:
The idea of a one person rebellion such as this is really good, and I like it overall, but you used way too many exclamation points. Majority of the lines used with them didn't need them at all and because of them, I stopped reading it halfway into Part Three. Edit that, and it'll be better.
 
mkk10 replied...
Feb. 26, 2013 at 8:09 pm :
Thank you. I understand where you are coming from and after going back and reading it again I agree with you. However, I can't edit the story without reposting it, so I might not fix it for a while but thanks for the feedback.
 
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