Pretty darn good, I'd say. I like the way you go straight to the point about everything. And I also like the tone of Kami, its very normal and girly. Lots of female protagonists in books try to sound like they have sooo much attitude and they're the saddest and most pathetic person in the world.
And yet the sweetest thing is that Kami isn't perfect. Look at all those guys she dated!
(PS: Can you also check out on a novel of mine? It's called Two of a Kind. And keep uploadi... (more »)
#1) I get to be the first one to comment so YAY! haha
#2) UPDATE ASAP!!! Thanks :) LOL It was great! Please keep writing!