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Patch C.
Making You Mine...
Summary: The ultimate combination of love, loss and Gothic betrayal. What happens when your taken away and forced into a competition. The winner will marry the vampire prince and everyone else - will die. Now I'm forced to fight against my best friend for a love I don't want but a life I want to keep.
He talked to me the prince and stared into my eyes.
"I could enlighten you with the promise I would die for you but no..." He paused. "I would kill for you and I am making you mine..."





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Cheshirekat said...
Jul. 11 at 3:31 pm:
Wow you have to finish this!
 
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bubbles6 said...
Apr. 28 at 8:51 am:
You should right more, I really can't wait to see where this goes.
 
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LostInStereoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 11 at 5:49 pm:
The storyline is unique, which makes the story very entertaining. However, I agree with the other commenters when they say to check your grammar. Also, be sure to stay in the same tense throughout the entire story. I do the same thing when I write. I begin writing in past or present, and end up in the other. It helps immensely with the flow of the story if you are sure to stay in a single one. Also, it doesn't make sense if the story is in present tense one sentence, and past in the next. Good... (more »)
 
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RoseRatchet said...
Jan. 20 at 6:41 pm:
uniqueish idea, please continue and please check your grammer.
 
RoseRatchet replied...
Jan. 20 at 6:43 pm :
*grammar, also please ignore the irony of these comments
 
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FallenAngel170198This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 9, 2013 at 9:15 am:
Write more please? :D this is awesome
 
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HeLLo2u2 said...
Nov. 28, 2012 at 11:46 am:
this was realy good but id go through it againg and cheak your spelling and gramar.
 
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RachelB2 said...
Mar. 26, 2012 at 7:33 am:

"i kicked and trashed"

no, you didn't trash, you thrashed

 
Cheshirekat replied...
Jul. 11 at 3:02 pm :
The irony of this statment is killing me..
 
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RachelB2 said...
Mar. 26, 2012 at 7:29 am:

Hey Rachel here

great book and i actually think that it wasn't just cjrlotte using my accoung which she made for me...

 
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FULLSTOP said...
Mar. 26, 2012 at 4:25 am:

HI!!! annoying psycho here...

OKAY...

a) this is an AMMAZING BOOK

b) whilst it deserves comments, try this: comment on other people's work, and ask them to look at yours when they do. It works

 
FULLSTOP replied...
Mar. 26, 2012 at 4:26 am :
actually, can you look at some of my work? 
 
Renegade9891 replied...
Mar. 26, 2012 at 4:52 am :
kk, I'm a looking.
 
FULLSTOP replied...
Mar. 26, 2012 at 5:09 am :
k btw Lou Lou i can't find ur orum. wassitcalled?
 
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Renegade9891 said...
Mar. 26, 2012 at 3:48 am:

Hello, everyone. 

I would really appreciate it if you could all vote and comment. I would love comments even if they are negative. I, as a writer, still have LOADS to learn.

Thank you,

 
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